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Discussion of "We Met on a Cloudy Night" by r_3ND5_F03V3


1 dogdeity11 3 years, 5 months ago Reply

This is sweet and touching. Very emotional.
The only thing I wanted to point out is that in the first sentence you indicate that its cloudy with ‘not a light in the sky.’ Then a bit later you say that the boys black hair is ‘glistening in the soft moonlight.’
Overall I really liked it.


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