Discussion of "facing others outer demons" by pyrokail

allright, i did'nt have much to work with on the first part of the story, it was allright but it was like i walked into the middle of the story it really had no structure to begin with so you could really turn the story any way you want, i thought it would be intresting to turn it into something optimistic but this was early in the morning and i was tired as hell i'd rather write my own story all together.