Discussion of "Twinkling Pixies. Fun!" by purelilyrose
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syruscleat 3 years, 4 months ago
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Great job PLR! You had every bit of my attention from the beginning to the very end of this cute little story. So, what happens next? I'm wondering... Sy |
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moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago
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I wouldn't even attempt a Chapter 2 on this story, as my writing could never meausure up to your superb Chapter 1! It is a wonderfully cute story by an expert writer! |
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syruscleat 3 years, 4 months ago
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Great imagination! |
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mybeautifuldaydream 3 years, 4 months ago
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Good writing. I was instantly drawn in. |
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purelilyrose 3 years, 4 months ago
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Thank you for the compliments. I am very happy with how it is turning out. This is my first collaborative story. So, I'm very interested also on how this piece will turn out. |
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Jamaican_writer 3 years, 4 months ago
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There is a certain something i like about this chapter,though i cant quite put my chubby little finger on it. keep it up. |
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onlyme 3 years, 4 months ago
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I loved it!! Very cute I would love to read more. |
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onlyme 3 years, 4 months ago
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I loved it!! very cute story. |
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honeygloom 3 years, 4 months ago
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I thought fairies only did nice things, like grant wishes... Very cute! Nice work! |
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