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Discussion of "The Clearing" by prtyemogrl


-1 AdaraDarville 11 months, 1 week ago Reply

I think you should lengthen the chapter, and give more detail, but all in all it had an interesting hook.


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0 prtyemogrl 11 months, 1 week ago Reply

It is an introduction of sorts.


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