Discussion of "The Clearing" by prtyemogrl
AdaraDarville 1 year, 6 months ago
I think you should lengthen the chapter, and give more detail, but all in all it had an interesting hook.
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prtyemogrl 1 year, 6 months ago
It is an introduction of sorts.
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