Discussion of "Climate of Fear" by probabilitest

I truly like your writing style!
and great Name!

Thanks.

I'm not going to score you because I have such a problem with wandering point of view that I don't think I could be fair about the rest of it.

Silver, I am not an English major so I may have missed somthing in my telling of the story: "Climate of Fear." It appears to me that it is all in third person. I would appreciate learning what you mean by "wandering point of view." Sincerely, Probabilitest

I would like for you to add a chpt to a story I have created...click on my name and read "I am requesting 28 authors..." for more details.
Hope you will contribute.