I love how you compared memories to a pool of water, very inventive. :)
Loved this poem.

This would make a really good riddle.

I'd honestly cry if my parents didn't support me in my writing. It is such a huge part of who I am. I know there was a time when they told me that it shouldn't be my first proirity: it wasn't a good feeling.
Great short story.

A real tear jerker. :'( Such a tragic love story.

This is a really beautifully chilling piece. Short but straight to the point. I loved it.

Aww... This is so sad. :(

Just wanted to point out a spelling error "I shall feel you no more,"? < See right here. You have a coma in the wrong spot and your quotation's wrong. Easily fixable.
This poems a little different from the rest of you writing. I like it. It almost sounds like someone cheated on their loved one or something.

Really great introduction! The story sounds really interesting so far and I'm hoping to see more chapters in the future. :)

This is a pretty good poem. You used a lot of description. In my head I saw someone waiting alone at the train station. I'm not sure who their waiting for though. It was a really nice poem.

"its time for you and I" < This line here seems a little choppy to me. I think it would sound better if you wrote "It is time..." instead because to me it just sounds a little more pleasent and it goes with the rest of your poem. The poem was really cute Andrew: happy to see your still writing while your out.