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the ancient evil race (draft)  by poetryking

Long ago back when the world was still young. There was an ancient evil race that was locked away by the powers of the ten mystic rings of the gods of the universe. One dark raining depressing day a wicked man awoke the sleeping creatures. This man was so full of demonic powers that the race of warriors did not even try to take control. unknowingly after the wicked man had unleashed the ancient race upon the world ten mystical rings had been released into the world also. The first five rings went a group of friends that where going to find memory rings, Ben the oldest of the five friends discovered the rings. Hey guys come here look at these Ben yelled to his friends. Oh wow bens girlfriend Alexis said in aw. wow Jessica, Ailin, and Cassy all said. They even come in our favorite colors Ben stated to everyone. Now only if we knew how much they cost Alexis told Ben. Well let's find out, excuse me miss how much do these rings cost Ben asked the storekeeper. Oh those rings are thirty-five dollars for one or one hundred and twenty five dollars for all of them, that is a fifty dollar savings the storekeeper exclaimed. Oh please Ben please may e get the rings Alexis begged along with everyone else. Oh ok we can Ben said with a soft loving look in his eyes. Oh thank you Ben thank you Alexis squealed kissing him. Wow ben said and fainted. ok get Ben the black one Alexis told Jessica while she held Ben up.

  Oh what happened ben said as he looked around franticly. You fainted Ben Alexis and Jessica said calmly. Oh i had the weirdest dream Ben stated to his friends with wide eyes. Ok honey you can tell us as we leave, we already bought the rings Alexis told him as they left the shop. Ok you can tell us now Alexis told Ben. Ok well it started out with all these creatures around me, and I had all these strange supenatural powers, then i looked down and the ring was on my right ring finger, ok please listen to me and hear me out ok follow me and please don't think i'm crazy for wanting to try this Ben asked leading his friends into a dark alley. Ben started backing up against the wall and started thinking about the dream he had, almost instantly Ben was turned into a being that was a shadow black with blood red eyes. Ben how did you do that Alexis asked in aw and amazment. I just thought of the ring having powers, and it did the rest of the work Ben said.

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Date created: Nov. 6, 2008
Date modified: 1 week, 1 day ago
Comments: 0
Tags: darkness, earth, fire, hate, heaven, hell, light, love, mystery, rings, romance, shadow, shadows, water, wind
Word Count: 484
Times Read: 174
Story Length: 1