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Discussion of "The Disaster" by pennysenny


1 justhoff 1 year ago Reply

So that's how ants feel. Nice scene,


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1 Stormbird_57 1 year ago Reply

A Bugs Death, the sequel to A Bugs Life.


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1 synapto 1 year ago Reply

Ouch.


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1 Norcia 1 year ago Reply

Aww, I feel badly for the poor things. Nice reveal at the end of the chapter.


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1 rijaowais91 1 year ago Reply

u can feel for that little thing i suppose :p . . Good work


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1 pennysenny 1 year ago Reply

Thanks for the feedback!


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1 tomcat 1 year ago Reply

Yeah baby! Like it a lot. The last sentence was the best part. Can't wait for the sequeal.


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1 emma5678whodou 1 year ago Reply

ooh I liked this I wasn't expecting the ant part very good! :3


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