All Comments by pawsupmonsters

I really liked this poem, that sounds terrible! But it was well written, I felt fear and misery and confusion radiating off of it. Nicely done.

I really enjoyed this, at times it was a bit confusing, but it's like morals to live by. We would all be wise to take SOME words from you and put them in action. Nicely written, well done.

Ok, I'm going to seem like the bad guy here, trust me, I'm not half the writer you are, but it just seems a little bit... "My daddy beats me so love me" sorta thing. What's her age? What's her name? I want to know more about her. Or is she a he? I don't know, but it was very well written.

I love the rhyme scheme, as to the disguise thing, it makes you curious. :)