Discussion of "To Freedom" by optimisticcynic
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optimisticcynic 3 years, 9 months ago
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wtf, who gave me a .5, it's really not that bad |
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story_fiend 2 years, 7 months ago
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I want to know what happens next here. Where does he finally end up? |
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honeygloom 2 years, 6 months ago
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It's a really good start actually. I like the tone, your protagonist seems to have no worries at all about what might happen to him without a roof over his head. I would have liked a little more detail about how bad his life was, but over all I enjoyed it. Nice work:) |
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