Discussion of "To Freedom" by optimisticcynic

wtf, who gave me a .5, it's really not that bad

I want to know what happens next here. Where does he finally end up?

It's a really good start actually. I like the tone, your protagonist seems to have no worries at all about what might happen to him without a roof over his head. I would have liked a little more detail about how bad his life was, but over all I enjoyed it. Nice work:)