Discussion of "Floating Nightmare" by nothinghidden

I read this because I enjoyed the playground story and I was not disappointed. Your structure is precise, complete, you are very good at description in the unconventional sense, less is more here and the theme is pretty cool, space cops? Good little story that would be fun to mash...nice concept, you're talented...

this has potential, but you left us all hanging. hopefully you'll write more, or someone will.