Discussion of "Playground" by nothinghidden

1		alharris 1 year, 6 months ago Reply Welcome to SM. This is a great first chapter. It is longer than most posts, but necessary to get the feel of the two worlds. I look forward to more writing from you.
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1		mvenkateswarulu 1 year, 6 months ago Reply it is very fine
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1		BazookoJones 1 year, 6 months ago Reply I liked this, which isn't really my favored genre, or not the type of stories I am drawn to but it was very well written, wordsmithing...
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