Discussion of "Blitzed" by newshack

like... did you research my life to write this or something? lol. except for the baby part. haven't fallen off that cliff yet. whew.
Gave it a four.

Thanks Quantas! This was my first try here, I know it is a little rough! I plan to continue the story if no one else does. I am extremely interested in feedback, so thanks a lot.

Great start! you should continue this, I have a feeling it would get rave reviews.
Welcome!