Discussion of "Laying Siege" by nayrj84
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an_dochasach 3 years, 12 months ago
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Excellent! You've really kept up the humor, voice and creative use of language of the original. Keep it up. I'm going to attempt a follow up with "Skeletor's Wall" |
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livesideways22 3 years, 11 months ago
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Love this story. your use of whitty humor and a downright goofy sence of comedy makes things interesting. keep it up, i beg you. |
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Rodafina 3 years, 11 months ago
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I want to add to your story but cannot possibly imagine continuing it as MY story. You are the only one I want to hear the History story from. Love your writing. More, please. |
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Xylith 3 years, 11 months ago
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I heartily agree with Rodafina. |
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Jackoalltrades 3 years, 10 months ago
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That crazy cat haha I'm really enjoying the continued story of History. Though Ulysses probably thinks he's the cat from Hell or something, since nothing seems to make sense around him. I'm really loving the use of human language. First the boss's Elmer Fudd impression and now Skeletor's accent. They just make me smile. Keep that detail :) |
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