Discussion of "Spark Some Change!" by nashvillebecker

Removed my vote from the other one and placed a 5 on this one.

Ditto.

I mashed on something else 'cause I went blank or got lazy or both. :-)

I always saw "Marty" as a patsy who turns the tables by going underground in plain sight (gee that's never been done before), but it's not a result of research (Conspiracy Theory) or training (Bourne). It's because of his chosen profession - he's an actor who SURVIVES each scene on the fly - he doesn't just perform it.

Until now, however, Marty never realized there was a greater power keeping watchful eye over him. I also see him as a good actor (ergo the confidence) and a quick improviser. I think his defense mechanism is smartassdom and he thinks he's too smart for his own good. Whether or not he is that smart is still under debate.

_His_ writing skills (admittedly not as strong as some StoryMash authors) arose later in the story; I think Shadow prompted that.

I like him. I'm clueless where he'll go next, but isn't that the beauty of this mess?

-- Nash

I took him south (probably in more ways than two)

Oh, and the "Chuckles" thing killed me.

You three are seeming to work well here. I am not sure that I can write this type of story, but I sure like reading what you all are writing here.

Just catching up…another 5er here.