Discussion of "CoC: Peeping Toms and Sitting Ducks" by nashvillebecker

Interesting. Further down the rabbit hole...You present a good set-up for conflict here, and a likable character in the maid. Also more evidence to support the fact that John Hughes is an **** who deserves his comeuppance.

Another thing I forgot to mention, I like how the woman has been led along so far, but is now beginning to take the lead, perhaps not to exact her total revenge, but she'll probably need to build up to that.

You taking this one, Cheese?

Yes.

I hope you don't mind.