Discussion of "Contractual Obligations" by nashvillebecker

Ha - couldn't wait until Thursday, I see. Awesome continuation, man -- now I have to figure out what to do with an army of bums.

You guys have a great thing going. Don't stop, in my opinion this is publishable material. 5 yet again.

This is absolutely bad ****.
Gave you a f’en 5!

Man, great dialogue.
Oh, just read it again. Id give you another 5 if I could!

Oh, yeah! It took me a couple of reads to see a way for this to go. More at Eleven....

Still a five!

I was wondering if you were going to re-join the fray. You started all this, you know, so I'm glad you're pleased with the mashing. I already added another chapter this morning so "chop-chop!" ;)

What happens when all of the chapters hit 5.0 across the board? StoryMash's alogorithms will burst, maybe? Who cares! Another big, big 5 from me, too. I like how you put ShadowMan "on the spot" to figure out what to do with an army of bums...lol. I sure don't have a clue, but I'm looking forward to finding out.

What away to write. I will never look at a bum the same way again...lol. Guys keep this going, I am now a fan.

This is one of the best continuations in the series. (no offense to anyone else) Great dialogue. Character development (Marty's) Really nicely done. 5

Hi Nash. I wrote a continuation to The Professional Assassin. Stop by and let me know what you think if you get a chance.