Discussion of "Blood Donor" by nashvillebecker

good writer, nice chapter

Great writing

Really strong writing, the story flowed incredibly well and the main character development was really strong. You've got talent.

"He smirked. She wasn’t going to get much from that pinhole. If she was willing to wait, Dennis had a hunting knife under the passenger seat in his Toyota."

Your character is likeably creepy. Not sure what to make of him, but I'm definitely interested.
The content is curious…seems like this and 'Bad Tips' are serving as character builders for perhaps a much grander story line down the road?
Both written exceptionally well.
Hope to see more soon.

The protagonist's self-sense of normalcy is what hooked me into this one. I love the fact that he is actually indignant about the reaction he got at the blood bank. I agree with Dog about the character building aspects of this one - could go far.

What a weirdo. But you make him very endearing somehow. It is hard to make strange characters seem real and not hokey but you did a great job.

I really like this. It was really AWESOME!
Well, I rated a 4 because I liked the details, very discriptive. I also, thought it was an interesting plot.

How wonderfully, wonderfully odd. You do very well with his unusual perspective on blood donation - it makes perfect sense to him and thus we can understand his confusion and anger.

Nice work creating the character. His behavior sets up any number of possibilities for future writing. Well written as well. 4 Stars.

what a great start. you've got a very tight story started here. well done!

I liked him, your story and your head. I'm not sure I want to be in your head very often but I definitely want to read some more of what comes out of it. 4

ooh delicously creepy! yet in some odd way a sympathetic character! What a unique way to do horror- lots of blood yes, (lol) but not the usual type! (no pun intended)!
Chloe

I left you a little something just for fun. Enjoyed yours, Nash, as usual.

NICE i like it alot!grabbed me and pulled me in and won't let go!Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Flawless. Total perfection. 5 stars, you ninnies! :)