Discussion of "Cons on Call: Looking for a Job" by nashvillebecker
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rocklee11416 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Hmm, this was pretty good. I kinda had a roller coaster ride with this though. I was disappointed when she went to the bathroom. Happy and excited when she said politics, the COC guy got confused and thought she wanted a government job, and she said John Hughes. Disappointed when she said she just wanted to get back on her feet. STUNNED when the card had shooter on it. GREATTTTT JOB!!:D |
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honeygloom 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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I'd forgotten about this story, but I'm glad you revived it:) Amazing as always! |
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wsells 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Hey Nash! Thanks for hitting me up and for hitting this. I'm with Rocklee - you had me - let me go and had me. But you said it wasn't perfect - so why look for perfection. What I really liked was the transition - smooth. You picked it right up where it left off. I'm prejudiced in that I had a course for this to take. But let's see where Shooter takes it. |
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wsells 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Oh, and the handcuff "C's" is perfect! |
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writerwannabe 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Excellent mash, Nash!! Not only your writing, which is at it's standard superior quality, but also because you rejuvenated a story start that I absolutely loved but somehow lost track of; and, you got wsells back!!! That's the real bonus here. I haven't seen him post in way over a month...lol. Great job and thanks! |
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