Discussion of "Midnight Madness" by nashvillebecker

0		Acee_Andrade 3 months ago Reply 4.5 excellent! I love your stories. Don't stop writing or I'd be unhappy, quite unhappy.
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-2		DwayneHoover 3 months ago Reply Rups scoops and dupes. The only thing was the money value, it seemed to high for working class peoples such as the degos and wops. other then that I like the twist. Am I wrong or didn't you have the guy talking to someone in the beginning reminising, if so you should have returned to it, unless you make part two, then you should have the hustler take a town of rich white people with some miricle skin cream that gets rid of wrinkles and sh.it
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1		Cheeseliker 2 months ago Reply A nice short piece of what goes around comes around. You're writing always has great dialogue, interesting and realistic-feeling characters, and intriguing events that keep you reading.
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