Discussion of "CoC: Blow It Up Real Good" by nashvillebecker

So perhaps our heroine is not the gun-toting assassin we thought she might be. Perhaps the 'delicate ****' is more to her taste. Good chapter, though all that seems to be happening is this woman is passed from one person to another with nothing substantial really happening. I think everyones ready for her to stop moving around and actually learn something.

Good call, Cheese. With the initial plot, Julie seemed a victim of circumstance, so passing her around to add to the confusion seemed reasonable. But yeah, I can see how it feels like stalling. Chapter after next (as I'm trying to avoid back-to-beckers), I'll make sure to do something about that.

I don't buy into the life-is-awful-so-suddenly-I'm-a-badass transformation so common in movies/stories. She may have the instinct change, but I see no reason for someone who hasn't shot before to master a gun under an afternoon's tutilege by Nazi Mama.

You up to tapping into the storyline? I'm trying to finish a finale for TSNK, then I'll follow Gay Prez. (Now I need to find out who that band is...)

-- Nash

Heh, check wikipedia, pretty sure it, along with defensive vomiting came from there. I am considering tapping into this storyline. I've been hoping someone continues the gay prez storyline.
As for our heroine not being a gun-toting badass, I agree it is more believable. I'll give the whole story another read-through and see if I can't add something soon.

Nice Nash, I like that she's getting passed around though. It fits with the whole hoge-podge functionality of the CoC. They'll pass her around until they find her niche and let 'er roll. Nice work!