Discussion of "Parachutes" by nashvillebecker
Cornelius 1 year, 6 months ago
As usual, a radiant and engaging bit of writing. Yes, I do appreciate the tangibles. The contents of the bag. The twin mahogany doors. Your character's commentary is sharp and witty. He reads her, yet is unable to really connect. The dichotomy of a knowledge that doesn't bear fruit when it is asserted. She is cool and controlled, and he is a relic from the final chapter of an age where men made all of the rules.
Maybe she finally smiled at him, or maybe that is just a wishful libido still punching through the haze of chemo?
Nice to see you, Nash.
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Regz 1 year, 6 months ago
Well done, as usual. I'd try to give some detailed feedback but Cornelius just said it all (and better). My only concern is that this is all we'll get from you, and you'll let some other shmoe take a crack at **** up your proverbial ****, as you are wont to do.
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