Discussion of "October Chill: A Halloween to Remember (5)" by nashvillebecker

(Say first sentence with a Scarlet O’Hare Southern accent)
My, my…but you do have a deep, dark, deviant side after all, don’t you Mr. Nash.
Must be all that enlightening Florida SUN.
Well...um…I JUST wanted to say, ‘Welcome Back.’ (haha)
To start, extraordinary continuation! Although, I’ve come to expect that out of you and have yet to be disappointed. While your skills have been confirmed time and time again, it’s your creativity here that shines. You are one gifted son of a gun! You flowed with the changes and really turned this storyline into an exciting one to watch. I mean, does it get any better than the main character preparing for a showdown with Lucifer himself…all in an effort to lose and be reunited with this family…so he can then attempt to break out of Hell! Absurd. and brilliant! Would be fantastic to see the next installment detail the ‘show-down’ and the miscalculations of the main character as he tries to lose a battle with the Lord of the underworld, only to unwittingly succeed! Maybe with the help of someone as desperate as he is? An ally we may not expect, who has his own motives. Penemue perhaps? Or maybe Hitler. Haha. Thankfully it’s up to the next writer. Have fun with this one!
I’m still struggling with the right words for your amazing Omish series. Your chapter ‘Mary’ is my favorite first chapter and the story has progressed quite nicely since then, with Raven leaving a sensational chapter for me to follow.
I gave you a one on this chapter so that the lord wouldn’t get too angry with you for amassing a high score. (I mean, a virgin in the midst of her first period! Nash!!!)
But then I gave you a four for your skill and creativity.
All total…it’s a bouncing baby five.

I hate it when dog gets a comment in before I do...lol. He leaves me with nothing left to say except...ditto..yup, I agree..double what dog said. Well, I'm not much of a critic, commenter anyway. But, I will say this. I am pleasantly surprised and amazed at this display of creativity (dang, dog said that, too) and I am in awe, as always of your technical skill. I tremble everytime I have to follow you. Fortunately, wsells is on the hot seat, then Houlgrave and then....me. I am doomed, no doubt about it! 5 points, nash...wonderful writing!

Oh, my. If anyone wants me, I'll be in my thinking chair with Blue. This is a real hard on...I mean...hard one.

Oh, and great job Nash. You didn't miss a beat in creating this other world. Superb!

Mmmm, looks like this one's mine to finish off. I'm getting very excited... Um, don't let me down boys;)
Nash, what can I say, a battle with Satan himself? Some one ought to spank you!