Discussion of "October Chill: The Message (5)" by nashvillebecker

Florida done ya good!! You've come back with a vengeance...a vengeance for superb, thriller writing!! Muy excellento! Ausgezeichnet! I especially liked how you mixed Lionel Ritchie and a song title into the sentence..."genial"!

On the edge of your seat writing as usual...The preacher in the back seat. Superb. Great finish for the next masher.

Welcome back, gas and all! LOL
You spun this out of control and right to where it needed to be. Love the description of the baseball picture.

Wow Nash! What else can I say?! Fantastic chapter!

Good stuff Nash. While it didn’t do much to further define the storyline or answer any of its nagging questions, it was action packed. And all good stories need a car crash!
I especially enjoyed the way you worked the commodore’s lyrics in. And the vanishing capability of the Preacher. Nice touch. Gave me a solid idea for the next chapter.
As always, your skill is effortless and totally makes me jealous!
And we have a daughters name now too! Awesome. Now…we just need a wife and the family will finally be complete! I’ll see if I can’t work it into the next chapter.

Over the last six months, my wife's been in one fenderbender and my father-in-law's had two. Guess it's been heavy on the brain.