nashvillebecker
Last Login: Oct. 12, 2008
280 Comments by nashvillebecker
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nashvillebecker 2 days, 10 hours ago
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CoC is up for grabs until Monday, as I installed my last chapter for the week a moment ago. |
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nashvillebecker 2 days, 15 hours ago
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What a commercial! This reads like a teaser - read the real story to find out what happened. It contains a bombardment of shallow information to hook someone, but there's no real payoff. Like a commercial. |
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nashvillebecker 2 days, 15 hours ago
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I'm far from rich, earning just over $2/month here. Josh's assessment that the money doesn't matter should be taken to heart. (Lastly, I checked and you've made 7 comments in over two months. Quality can rise to the top, but it's easier when you get your name out there. Re-see #1.) |
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nashvillebecker 2 days, 16 hours ago
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I'm sure Gondy wouldn't mind; it's his parents fault for making his name so confusing. |
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nashvillebecker 2 days, 16 hours ago
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Seems we're all having fun developing the characters and stalling to see who'll blink first and send her headlong into the action. As you previously indicated, Julie was getting passed around from weirdo to weirdo; this time, Shooter is better defined. (There's a heart underneath that Swastica?) |
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nashvillebecker 3 days, 12 hours ago
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I know when I've been outdone. Wish I read yours before investing my time in mine. Ah well, live and learn. I'll try to check out some of your other stuff, Agg. See if I can't bounce something back. |
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nashvillebecker 4 days, 12 hours ago
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Good call, Cheese. With the initial plot, Julie seemed a victim of circumstance, so passing her around to add to the confusion seemed reasonable. But yeah, I can see how it feels like stalling. Chapter after next (as I'm trying to avoid back-to-beckers), I'll make sure to do something about that. |
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nashvillebecker 5 days, 9 hours ago
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I missed the boat for this one, but is anything happening with Giant Rock? Usually big projects go a couple chapters before fizzling out. Everyone too busy submitting contest entries and chapter 10s? |
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nashvillebecker 6 days, 13 hours ago
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CoC has two more chapters. |
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nashvillebecker 6 days, 13 hours ago
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Wow, six months into the site and this is the first story you deem mashworthy? I'm flattered. Nice touch. Brief, but consistent. You a one-hit wonder, or have you plans to make further contributions? |
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67 Chapters by nashvillebecker
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3.9/5.0 - published Oct 10, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
Movements, lateral and horizontal.
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3.8/5.0 - published Oct 09, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
The good news: I won't be a judge this round.
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3.8/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
Guns don't kill people. People kill people.
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
Julie is on the run. From? Or to?
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4.6/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
Three bodies + no clothes + many weapons = this chapter.
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4.7/5.0 - published Oct 01, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.6/5.0 - published Sep 23, 2008 - 8 comments (preview)
Thought I'd try my hand at sex. You know, like in college.
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3.6/5.0 - published Sep 19, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 16, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Sep 16, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
So I think "verse, huh?" and I decide on iambic pentameter. On top of that, I screw myself to the challenge of an acrostic. Epic tasks, indeed.
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4.8/5.0 - published Sep 08, 2008 - 6 comments
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 06, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
Want to get away from horror? I did. So I did. This is light, silly, and pointless. But then, what's in a name?
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3.6/5.0 - published Sep 05, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Aug 21, 2008 - 3 comments
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4.2/5.0 - published Aug 21, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)
This is my entry for the HAC
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4.6/5.0 - published Aug 01, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 23, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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4.0/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.7/5.0 - published Jul 11, 2008 - 7 comments (preview)
This is why I vote the way I do.
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4.6/5.0 - published Jul 03, 2008 - 31 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Jul 01, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
I know Houl requested one submission, but I'm throwing three in here. I could've done dozens. I've always considered Henson, Silverstein, and Geisel my three creative idols. Hope they're not rolling over.
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3.0/5.0 - published Jun 27, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
...and that was when nashvillebecker was reprimanded...
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3.1/5.0 - published Jun 27, 2008 - 2 comments
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4.1/5.0 - published Jun 25, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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4.6/5.0 - published Jun 24, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Jun 24, 2008 - 15 comments
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4.0/5.0 - published Jun 24, 2008 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
I couldn't resist. It's a miracle I found the one woman on the planet who's stuck with me for so long.
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4.3/5.0 - published Jun 23, 2008 - 19 comments
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4.6/5.0 - published Jun 20, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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4.5/5.0 - published May 29, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published May 27, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published May 26, 2008 - 6 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published May 15, 2008 - 17 comments (preview)
Common mistakes can hurt your story. Here are seven fairly simple ways to improve your writing.
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4.3/5.0 - published May 06, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published May 01, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 29, 2008 - 9 comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Apr 25, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.6/5.0 - published Apr 24, 2008 - 14 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Apr 23, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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3.2/5.0 - published Apr 18, 2008 - 8 comments
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 18, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.0/5.0 - published Apr 10, 2008 - 13 comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Apr 10, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Apr 07, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Apr 03, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 01, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published Mar 28, 2008 - 13 comments (preview)
There is an art to getting people hooked into your story. Hopefully this will provide some insight too.
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4.3/5.0 - published Mar 27, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 27, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Mar 25, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 25, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 21, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 21, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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0.6/5.0 - published Mar 20, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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2.6/5.0 - published Mar 19, 2008 - 22 comments
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 18, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published Mar 14, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story
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4.0/5.0 - published Mar 14, 2008 - 7 comments
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4.9/5.0 - published Feb 27, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 15, 2008 - 1 comment
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 15, 2008 - no comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 15, 2008 - no comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 15, 2008 - no comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 15, 2008 - no comments
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4.8/5.0 - published Jan 28, 2008 - 15 comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 11, 2008 - no comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 11, 2008 - no comments
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