Wow! very well written.. reminds me of how
I have felt before.. exactly!

I really like this because it put the emotion in my head of what the author was feeling. I also write similar to that.

Your comment gave me an idea for on of my stories! Thanks! lol

Wow what a rush and I can relate to the beginning about when I was a child! Keep writing!

Very short but I like where it's going.

That is true... what is a word anyways if it has no meaning to people.

Thank you for the advise. Some of my family who read my chapters also said the same thing. I am definitely realizing that I do need to start writing in 3rd person and organizing before I publish. I hear there are a lot of "haters" here but they can hate all they want because they will never amount to anything except for hating. Thank you for your comment.

You said that this writing was to close to home, and I can't delete and regret putting it up here. People take things out of context and I wasn't thinking about that when I posted that chapter. I elaborated on situations that could be but not necessarily are and now i see that people are just going to look at that and thing that I have a messed up marriage. I can't delete it.