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All Comments by moonglow

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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Great writing!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Good advice!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Yes, it IS sing-songy! Great job!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Intelligent writing! I hope you aren't really leaving the site...


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

I enjoyed your poem!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it! Yes, it is flattering when anyone mashes a story!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks! I tend to write short and to the point. You won't see long chapters from me...


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

I look forward to seeing your work!!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

I wouldn't even attempt a Chapter 2 on this story, as my writing could never meausure up to your superb Chapter 1! It is a wonderfully cute story by an expert writer!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

I meant it. With the slightest bit of effort on your part (i.e. typing up a manuscript!), you will go far in the romance world. Good luck (although you don't need it!).


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Wow! Nice writing! If you aren't yet a published author, you will be soon.


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3 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Yes, before I sold those magazines, we were told to never take no for an answer. They didn't warn us about selling on Superbowl Sunday!!??? Amazing I lived to tell this story.


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks...I actually meant it to be a bit funny. It is based on my own childhood door-to-door selling experiences. I knocked on some man's door trying to sell him a magazine subscription-during a big football game! BIG mistake!!!


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3 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Laughs! Thanks...I am glad some of you like my writing. I surely enjoy reading everyone's fine stories here on StoryMash!!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Patrick had me laughing. He wants "it", yet he doesn't want "it". Nice writing!!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

You sound like a very talented person! If you buckle down and finish something, I'm sure it will be successful. Good luck with your endeavors...and with seeing that snow!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks!!!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks for sharing your opinion!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Nice to meet you! It's much easier these days to be a published writer, thanks to the internet and sites like StoryMash!
I wish you luck with your writing. This is a great place to practice your skills. I've read countless stories about young adults (and even children) getting published. There are magazines out there that will publish young adult authors.
...But, StoryMash is a great place to "self-publish", get read and earn money! I look forward to seeing your work!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Great!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Thanks for commenting on my story! Anyone want to do a Chapter 2?


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2 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

This is a drabble (a 100-word story).


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Welcome to StoryMash! I'll try to check out some of your work. Maybe I can jump in with a chapter. Best of luck with your writing!


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0 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Congratulations!!!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

It doesn't work for me...oh well...


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1 moonglow 3 years, 4 months ago Context

Great story! You really captured the essence of being a child on Christmas. I'm working on Chapter 2!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

I'll try to post a chapter to another story before I continue with my own. There are plenty of great stories to choose from-no problem there!!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Yes, I am eager to hear more, too!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Thanks, honeygloom!! Now, I just need to carve out some time to work on the next chapter...


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2 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Welcome to StoryMash! I am new here, too.
I believe you get paid when people click on your ads (and perhaps on number of visits to your story).
Good luck with your book! May we ask what genre it is?
I look forward to seeing your work here!


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2 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Wow! I'd love to write chapter two-and I plan to when I get time! The possiblities are endless with this one!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Wow! You all are fast and amazing writers! Poor Dee. Her writing dreams are over...


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1 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

I love it! You got "Ed" exactly right! Plus, you provided something "funny" for me to play off of in chapter two (if I can still write a chapter two...I'm new here and a bit lost-ha ha!). Great job!!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Thanks, everyone! I am glad you enjoyed it. I think I'll do a chapter two, as well. I tagged it mystery, romance and thriller, I think! It could go any way. I look forward to seeing what anyone else does with the story!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Wow! This story could get interesting. It reminds me a bit of Flowers in the Attic!
I'll watch for Chapter 2!


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1 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Welcome! I am new here, too. Just start your own story or add a chapter to an existing one. I will try to get around to reading more stories here soon!

Best of luck,

moonglow


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2 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

That must have been an interesting dream! I "think" it is a science fiction story, a genre I'm not very familiar with. So, I can't really judge the story well, as I haven't read enough science fiction to compare your writing to. However, I can say that I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and I gave it the highest ranking. I look forward to seeing more of your work (and if it is NOT science fiction ,feel free to enlighten me!!).

Best regards,
moonglow


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2 moonglow 3 years, 5 months ago Context

Greetings! Where can I find a list of the story genres, please? Is there any way to sort out stories in the search...I wish to avoid reading or writing the more adult-type stories. Is there a way to, say, search for romance stories, etc.? Thank you!
What a unique site this is...my compliments to you! I hope to become a contributor here.


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