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moon_flower_girl123
Date Joined: July 11, 2011
Last Login: Dec. 4, 2012
Write to explore your thoughts, that's what I do. i write and create thru stories and poems. Don't hesitiate to Leave Some comments or critiques, thoughts, and questions, anything. Thanks for visiting my page! :D

182 Comments by moon_flower_girl123

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1 moon_flower_girl123 5 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Wow, I do like the imagery that is evoked. Very nice, could use a little more emotion in the tone but other than that, its great!

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2 moon_flower_girl123 5 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Nice combination! I like to see a original poem written by you though :)

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1 moon_flower_girl123 8 months, 1 week ago Context

hm..vivid and descriptive imagery, well done

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1 moon_flower_girl123 8 months, 1 week ago Context

what do you mean?

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1 moon_flower_girl123 8 months, 1 week ago Context

thanks guys!

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1 moon_flower_girl123 8 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Wow..

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1 moon_flower_girl123 1 year ago Context

I already with Norcia, it is quite simple and repetitive in a poetic sense.

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1 moon_flower_girl123 1 year ago Context

haha thanks stormbird!

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1 moon_flower_girl123 1 year ago Context

thanks guys!

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1 moon_flower_girl123 1 year, 2 months ago Context

wow what honesty and truth there is! I really like this poem.

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15 Chapters by moon_flower_girl123

"Time Fades Away" by moon_flower_girl123
4.0/5.0 - published Sep 01, 2012 - 4 comments (preview)
broken-hearted...
Tags: broken-heart, dreams, love, sad
"Love is Here to Stay" by moon_flower_girl123
3.5/5.0 - published May 08, 2012 - 3 comments (preview)
Never lose faith in love, someone will change your life, someone will make you feel loved. Never forget.
Tags: love, pain, romance, sweet
"A Snow Monster" by moon_flower_girl123
2.8/5.0 - published Jan 29, 2012 - 2 comments (preview)
Caught up with the horrors of a giant snowman.
Tags: cold, horror, snowman, wind, winter
"Cold Love." by moon_flower_girl123
3.0/5.0 - published Oct 22, 2011 - 7 comments (preview)
The Wintry Night...republished! A Love Story on a bitter, winter night.
Tags: grief, heart-broken, love, mourning, winter
"Beautiful Bird, Forever Good-bye." by moon_flower_girl123
3.5/5.0 - published Oct 09, 2011 - 27 comments (preview)
Often, You will know the exact time to say good-bye...when the moment to fly comes just around the corner for this beautiful little bird.
Tags: bird, conflict, fly, good-bye, new-born-baby-bird, sadness, soar, trouble
"Aurora’s Luminance" by moon_flower_girl123
3.8/5.0 - published Jul 16, 2011 - 25 comments (preview)
Have you ever wonder where the Aurora Borealis came from? Well, now you will discover its mystery through this Greek fantasy and the tragedy of two star-crossed lovers...
Tags: aphrodite, aurora-borealis, dance, greek, lucifer, night, roman
"An Enchanted Autumn" by moon_flower_girl123
3.5/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2011 - 2 comments (preview)
Fall is a lovely time of the year and nature has yet fail to bring us beauty even when trees are shedding and leaves are dying..
Tags: autumn, fall, nature, season, trees
"Frozen Warriors" by moon_flower_girl123
3.5/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2011 - 2 comments (preview)
The iciness of winter is bitter, but beautiful..
Tags: frozen-warriors, snow, winter
"The Anger of a Demon" by moon_flower_girl123
3.2/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2011 - 6 comments (preview)
The sensation of anger can often have deadly effects and consequences..
Tags: anger, demon, tiger, volcano
"Spring [Poetry]" by moon_flower_girl123
3.5/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2011 - 7 comments (preview)
Spring is my favorite season and its picturesque scenery is something to enjoy and take pleasure in:)
Tags: embrace, petals, rain, spring, sunshine
"Away From Here [Poetry]" by moon_flower_girl123
3.4/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2011 - 4 comments (preview)
I always dream of flying away from here...to a distant realm far, far away...
Tags: away, brother, dream, father, mother, place, sister
"The Moonlight Radiance" by moon_flower_girl123
3.1/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2011 - 2 comments (preview)
A cold lonely night turns into something deadly and icy like the pond in a childhood dream of a young girl...
Tags: death, heaven, love, sisters
"A Wintry Night" by moon_flower_girl123
3.1/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2011 - 1 comment (preview)
Sometimes loving someone hurts more than losing someone...
Tags: hurt, love, night, pain, winter
"The Mystical Light of Heaven" by moon_flower_girl123
3.1/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2011 - 3 comments (preview)
Meeting someone new is not always a happy encounter...especially when they are dead.
Tags: death, discovery, relationship, sadness
"The Beauty of Love" by moon_flower_girl123
3.3/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2011 - 15 comments (preview)
Someone once told me that love is like the wind - though it cannot be seen, it can be felt. Yet, I have never felt how powerful love was, until it hit me like a raging tornado; the force of its “wind ”knocking me down.
Tags: love-story, romance, sad