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Discussion of "Soul's Cry" by mobler


1 theblackhand 2 years, 4 months ago Reply

keep it coming....


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1 stringstrumer8 2 years, 4 months ago Reply

Wow, that was beautiful. Really good metaphors.


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1 MisterSirMan 2 years, 3 months ago Reply

You're making it better than where it started.

More details please. I know the word "dark" and what it implies, but please describe it from the character's experience. I know all teenagers feel dark.


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