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"A poem... not a story" -> "Soul's Cry" -> "A Distant Bel" -> "An Angry Cry"

Feeble Flame, Torrential Rain  by mobler

Rain runs over my soul
flooding me, beyond control

Starry light, a soft sigh
fade away distant lie

Evening light, hold it fast
darkening, turns to ash

Blown away, red hot dust
sparks of life, now to rust

Rain from heaven pierce my soul
echo back the pain I know

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Date created: May 5, 2008
Date published: May 5, 2008
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Word Count: 63
Times Read: 330
Story Length: 1