All Comments by mobler

I haven't got a name for the main character yet. I wanted to see if people felt the character was more male or female in nature.

I really enjoyed your characters random flow of thoughts and the first paragraph was great. Even if the rest of the chapter had been terrible I probably would have kept reading just because of that paragraph. Anyway I loved the character so much I thought I'd try my hand at writing a second chapter even though you already had one. Love to know what you think of it.

I thought it was the best of the chapter 2 continuations. The chapter was short but it ended with great suspense.

Thanks. I enjoyed your version as well. Less spooky but more intriguing.