mjm942 |
Date Joined: Jan. 23, 2008
Last Login: Aug. 30, 2010 |
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71 Comments by mjm942
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mjm942 3 days, 8 hours ago
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I am IN! |
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mjm942 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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I can dig it. It grabbed my attention right off the bat. That's half the battle |
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mjm942 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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Yeah there's definitely the danger lurking there in the woods. I can feel it building. |
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mjm942 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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The grammar and flow are all there. I'm just waiting for something to jump out and grab me though... |
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mjm942 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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Thanks a lot. I'm looking forward to getting pretty far out with it. Feel free to mash away |
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mjm942 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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Yeah I have a lot of work to do with this. I'm trying to send him out on a vigilante mission to destroy this girls abusive cop husband...haha who knows, we'll see where it goes |
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mjm942 9 months ago
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Kinda reminds of the big Lebowski. It's nice, but I think you could cut a lot of the wordiness out and make it easier to read. I like the story and the character a lot, but I had a hard time staying on track. |
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mjm942 9 months ago
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*.com |
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mjm942 9 months ago
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Sounds like a deal. I just wrote something if you want to mash it. And I'll gladly reciprocate. If you ever want to get a quick hold of me, my email is 24hourlight@gmail.cim |
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mjm942 9 months ago
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I wish I could say that it didn't strike a chord. Very nice. |
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32 Chapters by mjm942
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2.9/5.0 - published Apr 27, 2010 - no comments (preview)
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-- /5.0 - created on Dec 06, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.1/5.0 - published Nov 30, 2009 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Oct 30, 2009 - no comments (preview)
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2.4/5.0 - published Jul 16, 2009 - no comments (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Sep 14, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Jul 02, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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2.5/5.0 - published Apr 11, 2009 - no comments (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Mar 03, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Simon gets schooled
Tags: sci-fi |
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2.0/5.0 - published Jan 21, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
Read chapter one first.
Tags: dark-comedy |
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2.4/5.0 - published Jan 14, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
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1.0/5.0 - published Jan 10, 2009 - no comments (preview)
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2.7/5.0 - published Jan 13, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)
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"Heldonia" by mjm942
3.1/5.0 - published Jan 08, 2009 - 4 comments (preview)
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2.4/5.0 - published Jan 07, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)
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-- /5.0 - created on Feb 13, 2008 - no comments
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3.5/5.0 - published Feb 08, 2008 - no comments (preview)
Brandon has delusional thoughts of becoming an astronaut. His great aunt died and he still gets her oxycontin scripts. He sells these pills to finance his advanced physics classes in community college, which he does poorly in.
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1.0/5.0 - published Feb 11, 2008 - no comments
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