Discussion of "The Night Out (Very Adult Content)" by mjbelluto
synapto 7 years ago
See synapto comment on erotica. See synapto hesitate. See synapto branch out, eh JD?
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mjbelluto 7 years ago
Hey there, that is good feedback and I do not disagree with you and I did have some of that in there, but the character limit was too high, so I cut some of that out. I will try to work that out moving forward.
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TumbleThorn 3 years ago
poorly written porn
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