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Deceived: The Preface  by miirandafindlay

I turned the corner, my shoes sliding against the hard pavement, the footsteps of my pursuer growing louder and louder. I had to get away.

Run, just keep running, I repeated in my thoughts. I heard a door slam several feet behind me, and then footsteps approaching me. I was becoming breathless; I knew I wasn’t going to make it. And although I feared for my life, I could not forget the people I would save. "As long as they're okay, that’s all that really matters," I said to myself. Reassuring words that kept me going until my very last breath.

I gasped, and I felt a sharp blow to the back of my skull. Then I saw my life flash before my eyes, and the image of death right before me.

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Date created: June 25, 2010
Date published: June 25, 2010
Comments: 0
Tags: horror
Word Count: 252
Times Read: 88
Story Length: 6
Children Rank: 2.0/5.0 (1 votes)
Descendant Rank: 0.0/5.0 (5 votes)