haha nice i like it keep it up your works good you got me interested in it all ^^

Okay hey let me know when you get something new up k?

Okay wow that was truely amazing you kept me reading the whole way and i wish there was more written on it but oh man that was good! keep up the amazing work
`sira

i think you have a good story line going but at the same time what was going on? words confused me the text format was distracting. Could use some work
`sira

Way i wish you had more, im wondering where this is going to lead to now. Hope you add more soon!!!
`sira

Hey thank you so much you don't know how happy your comment made me, im still uneasy about my work, and i am going to publish 'a nameless lover' its just i had typed a lot and something happened to it and i haven't had a chance to rewrite it all and publish it. And i was going for realistic while at the same time a fantisy, like stephenie meyer's work (shes the one who inspireded the writer in me the most). Ad you know your right about some nof Sira's characteristics, i am one of the 'weird' people at my school, but im not disliked to the point Sira is, the characters tast in music and cars, are mine to most of the songs i talk about through out the story were the songs i were listening to at the time, and Sira's car the Aston is the exact car i would love to own but i highly doubt that will ever happen. and her wanting to love someone and to have some one love her is the mood i have been in for the last months (thats a bit emarising to say) And for years now i have been in love with Japan i live here in the USA but i have been dying lately to go there, which i might do before i go to collage.
Thats funnyish in my opion you and i both joind in the same month, and really i dont completly know what kind of person i am. HA the thing is i don't know where the stories come from the just come. See midnite raine is actually a novle i just finished writing and it came to me when i was just goofing around at my dads work writing another story, and now i am curently writing a new story called the untouchables and i plain on trying to publish them both(but not story mash publishing.
I hope you do mash on to my other stories it would be great, that's part of why i joined i wanted to see where my stories are taken. And i hope to read more of your work to.

lol yeah as soon as i can things have been a bit crazy you know school and all that fun stuff but like as said as soon as i get the chance

oh this was amazing i love ^^

yeah i might add to your story soon but i think im going to wait for another chapter to come out so i can get more of an idea as to what i would want ot type =^-^=

No problem artemis19 im curios as to where this stoy may lead who knows i might add more to the story soon =^-^=