michelleregan |
Date Joined: March 7, 2008
Last Login: Jan. 16, 2009 |
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4 Comments by michelleregan
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michelleregan 4 years, 4 months ago
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I like the story but the grammar needs work. |
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michelleregan 4 years, 4 months ago
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As an intro, the story seems a bit too cynical. I think it needs some more detail in the beginning in order to keep the reader on the same emotional wavelength. |
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michelleregan 4 years, 9 months ago
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Ok, thanks. I will try to make the next chapter more enticing : ) |
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michelleregan 4 years, 9 months ago
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Thank you :^) |
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7 Chapters by michelleregan
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2.9/5.0 - published Jan 09, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)
James Harrison recounts the first time that he found a picture of his biological mother, the night his parents died.
Tags: egg-donor, parental-rights, picture |
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-- /5.0 - created on Jan 09, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Teenage Years
Tags: drinking |
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3.1/5.0 - published Jan 09, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)
Insight to a child's first intoxicated moment brought on by parental pressure and social obligation.
Tags: consumption, drinking, peer-pressure, underage-drinking |
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2.9/5.0 - published Aug 06, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.5/5.0 - published Aug 06, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
Six single ladies decide to head downtown for some action that can't be found on campus.
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2.9/5.0 - published Aug 06, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.4/5.0 - published Aug 06, 2008 - 2 comments
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