Discussion of "Wicked Virtue" by mellsy

What a fantastic story! I have yet to see any other story similar to this here on SM. Very entertaining. You kept my attention throughtout the story. I am highly impressed by the way you described each character, and how Charity's low self esteem about herself wwill boil over. I rarely ever give out votes of 5, but this story is very much deserving.....one of the best I have read, by far.

Thanks so much! I feel honored to have gotten the 5 star vote from you :) Really, thank you for the encouragement...I'm going to make a point to check out some of your work on here soon.

This was only the beginning.
wow like you just stop right there... bum
oh well its really good, keep writing!!!!!

hey mellsy!
Okay, so another terrificly written chapter. as with your other chapter, I thoroughly enjoy your writing style.
I did think it was a bit long, like maybe it could have been tightened up a bit and it would have still had the same effect. But thats just my opinion and I openly admit, this genre of drama isn't usually what I read.
Even so, I loved it. Your creative and crafty! Gave you a five.

You are so right on about it being too lengthy. I have always struggled with editing my own work and "tightening up" as you put it. I haven't even attempted to write like this in over five years, so I am probably a bit rusty! Hahaha! Thank you for the compliments and also for the advice, honestly, I appreciate it.