Discussion of "October Chill: Five Days Left" by mcnellism

Excellent follow-up! Your pacing and attention to detail make it an easy read. It has been a long time since I used a Micro "Fish" machine. Brought back memories. The sinisterness (is that a word?) of the preacher gave me goosebumps. Good job!

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Great continuation! I love how methodical you kept Stuart despite the strange deadline he seems to be under.

Let me see, sentence structure and grammar - excellent; storyline continuity - excellent; character development - excellent; plot development - excellent; leave for next mash - excellent. Wow! 5 excellents equal 5 points.
Great writing, mcnellism!

Thank you honeyglom and writerwannabe!