Discussion of "Jumping" by mayday8281

Just a side note ...
"The last thing I remember was me shouting at my dad and it all went pitch black from there. When I opened my eyes I was standing here ... on the edge of the terrace or maybe on the edge of insanity?"
For my father being dead for a couple of months ... I must have had one hell of a blank spot in my memories... but still nice continuation
Regards

Great story. Had my attention throughout the entire read. I enjoyed the lil twist at the end. =) Maybe I'll add to this but I'm more interested on what else you can add to it.

ForsakenSoul - I figured since he blacked out and had his breakdown, most of his memories during that time were gone. I'm thinking maybe he killed his father or something. I don't know. What exactly were you thinking when you wrote that line? I mean, if you were going to continue it yourself?? Thanks, by the way! I loved your intro!

dharmapunk33 - Glad you enjoyed it! I've got two different ways of going about it. Not sure if I'll continue my own chapter and wait for someone else... So feel free! :)

well mayday8281 you`re right .. the couple of lines I wrote can be interpreted in many different way so let's see what will come up next :D