Discussion of "The Tech Girl's Perspective" by mastercraft356

Some of these phrases are a little repetitive at the beginning, and I'm not a huge fan of technical jargon in any literature (it makes them less timely and narrows down your audience). Everything flows pretty nicely and your characterizations were fairly original, however. I might have to read the previous chapters now.

Great job! I liked all your chapters in this series. You have a good style of writing and the characterizations are very well done. All of the characters seem very real.