Discussion of "The Human Nature of Trash and the Trash of Human Nature" by marku2009
3rdSunrise 3 years, 10 months ago
When I started reading this, I said to myself, "Aw man, it's just a long-winded essay about how this guy likes garbage," and I skipped to the end. Then my eyes skimmed over the second last paragraph, and I said, "Wait, what?"
hidden comment from 3rdSunrise with score of 1
writerwannabe 3 years, 10 months ago
Welcome to Storymash, marku!
Although written in a serious vein, I found this story hilarious...;o).
Great use of analogy and metaphor and I really liked how you built your character.
Agreeing with 3rdSunrise...."well played"!
hidden comment from writerwannabe with score of 1