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Discussion of "The Human Nature of Trash and the Trash of Human Nature" by marku2009


1 3rdSunrise 3 years, 10 months ago Reply

When I started reading this, I said to myself, "Aw man, it's just a long-winded essay about how this guy likes garbage," and I skipped to the end. Then my eyes skimmed over the second last paragraph, and I said, "Wait, what?"
Reading over it more thoroughly, I found that this was no ordinary long-winded essay about how much you like garbage.
Well played, garbage man. Well played.


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1 writerwannabe 3 years, 10 months ago Reply

Welcome to Storymash, marku!

Although written in a serious vein, I found this story hilarious...;o).

Great use of analogy and metaphor and I really liked how you built your character.

Agreeing with 3rdSunrise...."well played"!


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