Eric,

I am seriously not offended. I guess you don't write enough to pick up the point. Just because there was no dialogue in the beginning doesnt mean that there couldn't be any at all.

I do know how to write.

Writing is a privilege of the mind for those who possess the power to write. It shouldnt matter what you write as long as you write, and as long as there is nothing vulgar in it. The more that you write, the better you become. Constructive criticism is okay, if you're an editor, but if you're not, it's just an opinion.

I found nothing wrong with your writings whatsoever. In my opinion, it is not okay to criticize someone who is using their power to write. The more you write the better you become. It shouldnt matter what you write, as long as you write, and it has nothing vulgar in it. Writing is a privilege of the mind for those of us who possess it.

why doesn't this person get his or her own sign in name?

that's true, doesnt sound story like to me.

oh the carribbean is very nice, the water is great. The beaches,, the beaches....my husband and I go twice a year, and it's fabulous, get on a ship and head to the carribbean. Relaxation is the key to alot of things.

Humor!!!!!!

i just watched that movie last night. It's a classic

in the opening sentence, i have a double word in there, day.... sorry, opps, thought i edited it better

Please elaborate on "Them", is it more than one person, or just one person. You can still fall in love at a young age, and it last a lifetime. There is no controlling that. I have a first love that i met at 14. I think about him everyday, and it's been 30 years. So yes, all is possible in love.