This was great. There is an old saying.."writing is easy, just open a vein and bleed on the page"...man, does this attest to that. Great job!

Okay then...I have posted a new beginning chapter of Mumus. If you are interested in turning this into a real story wwb, please do...but if not its cool.
Either way, I have been having a blast with this, and will keep going as long as you can last....so to speak ;-)

One thing tho, you changed from first person to third person....hmmmmm...what would Freud say? :-/

Ha! Love it. simply love it!! The perfect response!

:-) lol, how right you are! I will work on it, had a busy weekend, but will get to it in the next couple of days. Should be fun.

Thanks:-) here is what I have been thinking. I kind of like the way this is going...waiting for wwb's next move:-0 but any way I am going to work on a complete chapter starting from the beginning of this little farce, then see if wwb is up for going back and forth with it as we are now...just a thought...what does everyone think?

Love it...and the beat goes on...lol

This is good, demeonte, perhaps too good for the story:-)

It was fun...couldn't have done it without ya:-) I found the feet thing hilarious!

Thanks, honeygloom for coming up with such a great idea.

love it! really did come across such a bizarre raft recently while hiking. wish the rest would have happened also!