Discussion of "Awake II" by marcusgregory

1		nearsighted 4 years, 11 months ago Reply Awesome! you went exactly where I wanted to go, if only I had more patience.
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1		Acee_Andrade 4 years, 11 months ago Reply Chips in people: good times.
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1		writerwannabe 4 years, 11 months ago Reply nearsighted: Your start chapter was good but very ambiguous and short. I think marcusgregory gave this storyline a very good direction and left it at a point for any and all kinds of direction changes. Good job!
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