Discussion of "Press Down Harder" by makoallen

Very erotic! And I'm straight. Great use of vocabulary. I felt like I knew the characters very well. Good writing!

Whew! Very well written. I studied anthropology in collage and I think that threw me off track. I slipped into analyzing mode and couldn't get into the sexual part of it:) But definitely well written and thought provoking. Nice work!

Wow. I love erotic stories and this was great! Aside from the eroticism, I thought you did an excellent job of defining your characters and establishing a believable and interesting storyline. Great work!

I'll echo wwb's comment, except for the believable part (which isn't meant as an insult)... generally, I think erotica should stay in the "fantasy" realm.