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Discussion of "The Everlasting Peace" by livesideways22


2 dogdeity11 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

Dude...this is absolutely perfect.
Exactly what I, (the devils that made me do it), envisioned.
Short, gripping…in your face and to the point.
Nice work!

I hope others follow in your morbid footsteps. haha.


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1 livesideways22 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

I kinda figured that was the point, and I have to say, it is definately the most morbid, twisted thing I have ever written. I love it lol.


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1 Raivick 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

You write this right before you went home?....lol
I like it


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1 livesideways22 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

yeah, wrote it last night at about 6, before I went to that Linkin Park concert.


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1 ShadowMan 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

Good job. I have trouble doing a first person narrative, but you make it look easy.


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