Discussion of "The shadow" by lisastevenson924

That's so cool. I like how the shadow does things. That's really awesome. I love how the character has to struggle with the several different aspects of her personality, especially the irritated part about the Seuss items massacre. I really enjoyed that.

The character concept is extremely good, and I enjoyed reading it to see how the character reacts to each different characteristic of her psyche.

The concept of the shadow only interacting with the shadows of tangibles is an excellent hook - it very much caught my interest. If you intended this to be scary or suspenseful I think the constant back and forth between the soft/tough aspects of the main character tended to soften the blow overmuch. If it is light hearted effort, then ignore what I just said.

You spooked me so much I had a chapter squeak out of me. It was fun to add to BTW and gave you a five.

Great chapter...fun and suspenseful at the same time. Loved it!