Discussion of "She Whispered" by lionsheart24

Tantalizing descriptions. Good scene.

Thank You :)

Wow, that was good! Sexy but without going over the top.

Thanks :)

ew hes an old man with a lil girl

good story btw xD

Yep, Silence, you're right. If this were a real- life story, this guy would be a real scumbag for 2 reasons: cheating on his wife and cheating on her with a teenager. I'm glad it's just a story!

Haha thanks

It's a really cute fantasy, but I think I liked "Just Before the Beginning" better. It seemed more closely based on reality.

In real life, sex is more likely to be a bad experience than an erotic experience. Unless someone is white, male, and heterosexual, they can probably expect sex to be a chore, an obligation, an option for work someplace in the sex industry, or just something they can always expect to either have to pay for or sneak around to experience.

Something that most people who are female who live anywhere in the lower 48 states probably have to accept at some point in their lives is that, unless they plan to move to another westernized nation, sex will always be something "bad".

Women are expected to only cry rape, please their man, be 'mom', and complain that they've been sexually harassed. For a female, it's never OK to get laid. You would think that Jews being killed or someone who thought of themselves as a "vampire" biting someone's throat out would be more feasible.

Well done, lionsheart. I've added a chapter.

I think you might be interested in some of my stories, particularly:
Chee-Ann and the Interlopers
Cupid's Taser
Weird Science: The Gabriel Byrne Machine (but you might want to start at the beginning, if you can handle the stupid)

Oh, DUH...
and "Restless in Ragetown"

Thanks. I'll check them out.

Very nice indeed! I also liked the tone and the imagery. It was quite possibly the closest thing to rated PG-porn...(wait does that work?).
I would like to say though, that I was a little dissapointed with the guy's reaction at finding out the girl's a teenager. I mean, he already did it 4 times and is already knowingly cheating on his wife. When you've gone that far, you might as well be "**** yeah! Bangin' a teenager!" But, then again, I'm pretty sure that says less about the story and more about me...

Haha thanks. I thought about doing that actually and I found that it really took away from the tone of the scene. I really wanted it to be a little dark, conflicting and sultry. Going the other route would just kill the mood.

loved it!.....

Thank you. :)