Discussion of "Chapter 3" by ladyvike15

There are a few typos - I instead of it, no instead of know - are the ones I remember.

It's not clear when the italics start that Dani's sitting alone on the couch, so when Mom and Max come in and Mom's confused about why Dani's not dressing up for a date, I had to go back and check out that first paragraph for a re-read.

Oh... and the reason I came this direction to comment on your works was to say I've got the first chapter of the SUDS project up. It looks like you're listed for chapter two.