Discussion of "Joanna Carpenter" by ladyvike15

Hey, you know what? This is hands down the best thing you've written. I think you may have found your niche Lady:)

One thing to keep in mind is your word choice. Here for example:

"Thank heavens though, that I had my mother's solitude about me, and I could easily mask my emotions."

Solitude, of course means beaing alone which doesn't make sense right there.

Over all though, I'm impressed. Great job!

Quite a good start. Well done. ;-)

You should see the new one!

This is very well written and engaging. Get a sense of the characters, the rural setting and I could sense the attraction without it being stated outright. Bravo.